Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Shnurbs on June 13, 2016, 03:04:11 am

Title: [C+C] Faith from Mirrors Edge
Post by: Shnurbs on June 13, 2016, 03:04:11 am

(http://i.imgur.com/HU8Dftk.png)

Thoughts? I know there's probably a lot wrong here.

Title: Re: [C+C] Faith from Mirrors Edge
Post by: Shnurbs on June 13, 2016, 05:16:11 am

updated version:

(http://i.imgur.com/5VQIi82.png)

Title: Re: [C+C] Faith from Mirrors Edge
Post by: drain. on June 13, 2016, 06:22:52 am

They look really nice!

Main issue with your latest version is that everything lack depth, try using more faded colours for the background.

Title: Re: [C+C] Faith from Mirrors Edge
Post by: Shnurbs on June 13, 2016, 06:33:22 am

Quote from: drain. on June 13, 2016, 06:22:52 am

They look really nice!

Main issue with your latest version is that everything lack depth, try using more faded colours for the background.

This good?
(http://i.imgur.com/liHHy4J.png)

Title: Re: [C+C] Faith from Mirrors Edge
Post by: MysteryMeat on June 13, 2016, 07:08:58 am

building should fade too, it clashes with the helicopter and said chopper gets lost in it

edit: an idea for something to add could be towatds:camera bullet trails whizzing past for her to be recoiling from

Title: Re: [C+C] Faith from Mirrors Edge
Post by: Cherno on June 13, 2016, 11:36:47 am

Faith looks very clumsy on the picture, while in Mirror's Edge she is supposed to be an expert runner that I don't think would look like that when balancing on a narrow ledge.

Title: Re: [C+C] Faith from Mirrors Edge
Post by: Shnurbs on June 13, 2016, 05:24:00 pm

I dulled the colors on the background and foreground buildings, and added in bullet trails. I'm not very good with perspective as you can probably tell.

(http://i.imgur.com/maSb7At.png)