Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: hellgater on May 26, 2016, 11:30:40 am

Title: D-VA (overwatch) Fanart
Post by: hellgater on May 26, 2016, 11:30:40 am
Hi everyone, I'm around this forum for a couple of months but I'm not the most active member so I was thinking to post something here.

I'm in love with the characters design of Overwatch, specially with D-va's, and I want to create a version of her in Pixel Art, here are the results.

(http://i.imgur.com/LXlkOkY.png)

(http://i.imgur.com/n5OqaOX.png)

(http://i.imgur.com/0jrvJjl.gif)

(This animation is not my best job, but I think that it works fine xD)

EDIT: sizes changed to original resolution
Title: Re: D-VA (overwatch) Fanart
Post by: danmanr98 on May 26, 2016, 01:27:50 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/xvrOCw3.png)
NoooooOOooo you beat me to it xD
I was working on this a few days back [Incomplete].

Good job btw :D

My only critique is that D.va's torso feels a bit masculine?
Title: Re: D-VA (overwatch) Fanart
Post by: hellgater on May 26, 2016, 02:31:06 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/xvrOCw3.png)
NoooooOOooo you beat me to it xD
I was working on this a few days back [Incomplete].

Good job btw :D

My only critique is that D.va's torso feels a bit masculine?

Yeah, totally agree, I have to fix that xD

Looks really great, I want to watch it finished :D
Title: Re: D-VA (overwatch) Fanart
Post by: Oscar Blomqvist on May 26, 2016, 03:39:09 pm
Nice! Overall it looks really good. Two things that I think can be improved is D-Va's legs, they look a bit to short! Another thing is that the dust clouds coming out at the back of the mech looks slightly weird to me with dark outlines.
Title: Re: D-VA (overwatch) Fanart
Post by: danmanr98 on May 26, 2016, 10:10:17 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/g8V3nyS.png)
Update :D

What'chya think.
Title: Re: D-VA (overwatch) Fanart
Post by: MysteryMeat on May 26, 2016, 10:30:33 pm
RE: the animation, it might help to also move the feet and add a bit of judder with the steps. Other than that this is pretty solid work!
Title: Re: D-VA (overwatch) Fanart
Post by: kullenberg on May 27, 2016, 12:04:34 am
The standing pose looks a bit off and deformed, as if she's a disabled person who usually sits in a wheelchair. Here is my suggestion for a more natural looking pose, take what you want from it :)

(http://s33.postimg.org/3z6emjk5b/hellgaterpose.png)
Title: Re: D-VA (overwatch) Fanart
Post by: hellgater on May 27, 2016, 09:57:45 am
(http://i.imgur.com/g8V3nyS.png)
Update :D

What'chya think.
Looks amazing! I love that D-VA <3

The standing pose looks a bit off and deformed, as if she's a disabled person who usually sits in a wheelchair. Here is my suggestion for a more natural looking pose, take what you want from it :)

(http://s33.postimg.org/3z6emjk5b/hellgaterpose.png)
Wow, that is really better, now that I see that suggestion my D-va looks really awful xD Thank you for the tips  ;D