Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Vespertellino on May 18, 2016, 05:57:40 am

Title: Fireball throw sketch! Tell me if its wrong.
Post by: Vespertellino on May 18, 2016, 05:57:40 am

Trying new stuff. Let me know if I'm going the right way or not  :crazy:
(http://i.imgur.com/cbWyW6J.gif)

Title: Re: Fireball throw sketch! Tell me if its wrong.
Post by: MysteryMeat on May 18, 2016, 07:36:02 am

There's a couple things that stick out to me, the first being that the kick seems to be there to give the character a grounded stance but then they start flying into the air.
The second nitpick is that the tossing animation itself needs to be maybe a frame shorter, it's a tad slow.