Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: VictorR on September 28, 2006, 03:53:35 am

Title: Sagitarious
Post by: VictorR on September 28, 2006, 03:53:35 am

(http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/839/sagitarusik1.png)

Since my start sign is Sagitarious I thought I do this with it. It's not my lineart I just shaded so Id like CNC on that only.
Thanks!

rmedtx's lineart

Title: Re: Sagitarious
Post by: ndchristie on September 28, 2006, 01:12:35 pm

I think you may want to push your lights in the skins and fur to really make the forms stand out, im currently on a trash monitor and the whole thing looks falt brown except for the white blade and claws

besides that though it looks nice, but unfinished.  work on it more, develope forms and lighting more etc and you will have a nice piece




slightly OT since they arent your lines, what hapened to sagitarius being "The Archer" ??

Title: Re: Sagitarious
Post by: MoD on September 29, 2006, 08:09:36 pm

You have good shading here and it has nice potential, but a lot of the inner lines and a few of the outer could use some selout. The transition from fur to skin looks rather abrupt and as if it casts a shadow upon the adjacent surface. I suggest breaking the border up and making it look more natural that way.