Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: yuhga on March 21, 2016, 05:03:51 pm

Title: potential forum avatar
Post by: yuhga on March 21, 2016, 05:03:51 pm
Hey everyone :)

I'm new to this forum, but I thought it might be a good idea to show you a potential avatar I made today as a first object for criticism.

(http://i.imgur.com/SrRrOGF.png)

What do you think?
I don't have much experience with pixelart so far; the last graphic I made was huge and robbed me of my motivation pretty quickly, so I thought starting with 64x64 px might not be a bad idea.
I'm looking forward to your replies!


Title: Re: potential forum avatar
Post by: lachrymose on March 21, 2016, 08:16:49 pm
Thoughts.

(http://i.imgur.com/ug5ayd1.png)
Title: Re: potential forum avatar
Post by: Friend on March 21, 2016, 08:32:07 pm
more thoughts...  sorry i dont have time or proper feedback, and this edit is really horrible and rushed, but try cleaning up your outlines to 1 pixel thick, and focus on removing jaggies.

(http://i.imgur.com/HTjU1XI.png)


BTW WELCOME TO PIXELATIONNNNNNNNNNNN

(https://media.giphy.com/media/ON8fMRKCnk1os/giphy.gif)
Title: Re: potential forum avatar
Post by: Seiseki on March 22, 2016, 12:17:49 am
More thoughts!

(http://i.imgur.com/PxeDBnB.png)
Title: Re: potential forum avatar
Post by: yuhga on March 23, 2016, 09:26:58 pm
Oh wow, thank you so so much for all your quick replies!  :)
I'll try to realise your ideas during the weekend. Honestly, thanks a lot!
Title: Re: potential forum avatar
Post by: rocifier on March 25, 2016, 06:29:20 am
I think it might help to improve the form more, maybe giving her more of a neck and shoulders/arm shapes