Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: GrayAmaroq on March 15, 2016, 07:34:14 pm
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A mountain background animation, i am open for critique :)
(http://i.imgur.com/RnwnIzX.gif)
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I like it, it has a lot of character. i only notice 3 real things, all of them very minor:
1) the speed of the clouds, clouds are very slow moving, so the high speed they travel up creates a sped-up effect
2) the angles of the moon and clouds, it isn't a huge deal but it contrasts with the generally smooth line work of the foreground
3) the effect around the moon is not pixel art by strict standers (it seems like a computer generated effect)
all of these things are more preferences, than anything, tho. as a piece this functions well
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I'd try adding some sway to those trees and slow down the cloud scroll a bit, if the wind's that high there'd be at least a bit of tilt on that canopy.
Wouldn't be too hard to implement either, just a bit of move-tooling here and there.
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3) the effect around the moon is not pixel art by strict standers (it seems like a computer generated effect)
The animation thread technically doesn't need to feature anything pixel art related, just animation related.
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There is one tree that is floating in the air in the foreground layer, and another one in the last tree line ;)
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3) the effect around the moon is not pixel art by strict standers (it seems like a computer generated effect)
The animation thread technically doesn't need to feature anything pixel art related, just animation related.
Oh, didn't realize. Either way I thought they should be aware, in case they wanted to post to Pixeljoint or something. I don't mind the effect myself :)