Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Jicklus on January 25, 2016, 07:57:31 pm

Title: Game Logo Help
Post by: Jicklus on January 25, 2016, 07:57:31 pm

I'm thinking of making a game, so far I've come up with a logo, but I think it could do with a bit more. The game's going to be a 2D story adventure platformer, with a minimalist art-style.
(http://imgur.com/sszMFWN.png)

Title: Re: Game Logo Help
Post by: Glak on January 25, 2016, 09:20:42 pm

Make the Rs more like the Ls.  See how the Ls overlap the letters to their right?  The Rs should do the same, and should have short arms.  This will keep it as one solid mass of color, which seems to be your style.

Title: Re: Game Logo Help
Post by: |||| on January 25, 2016, 11:10:02 pm

I was going to say 'traveller' has only one l in it but I take it you're probably from the UK where it does use two ls. Otherwise I'd suggest spacing between each letter a bit; I just think it would look nicer that way.

Title: Re: Game Logo Help
Post by: Friend on January 26, 2016, 12:24:42 am

kinda hard to critique without seeing it in context of the game/start screen where it appears in my opinion.  besides that i think it might be too dark?