Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: shiban on December 06, 2015, 03:39:16 am

Title: First Sprite Attempt for RPG
Post by: shiban on December 06, 2015, 03:39:16 am

Hello~ So I'm starting to make an RPG that I've been thinking about for quite a while annd after messing around with Photoshop this is what I came up with.

(http://i.imgur.com/e5rl2Qc.png)

My shading isn't so great rn OTL but I'll get there
Anyway some feedback would be great :)

(Srry if the picture is weird im new here ;-;)

Title: Re: First Sprite Attempt for RPG
Post by: Pusty on December 07, 2015, 07:46:29 pm

I like it! :D
But thinks I noticed:
- You are variation between using outlines and not using them, you should stick using one of them
- Why are some arms stretched? I think the arm positioning looks weird overall
- Is that a box on the head of one of your characters? (if the answer is yes ignore this)

Title: Re: First Sprite Attempt for RPG
Post by: shiban on December 08, 2015, 01:37:03 am

Quote from: Pusty on December 07, 2015, 07:46:29 pm

I like it! :D
But thinks I noticed:
- You are variation between using outlines and not using them, you should stick using one of them
- Why are some arms stretched? I think the arm positioning looks weird overall
- Is that a box on the head of one of your characters? (if the answer is yes ignore this)

Thank you for the feedback~~ <3
Yeahh I was debating on whether to or not use outlines (decided not to now) and the arms really do look weird TT_TT - will fix soon
(It is a box XD he's a special character lol)