Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: TheRealAkito on April 23, 2015, 12:46:48 am

Title: [Closed]Melon Bread I guess!?
Post by: TheRealAkito on April 23, 2015, 12:46:48 am
Okay, So I'm working on my company logo, Melonpan Studios.
The logo is obviously a melon bread. So I googled a reference.
Here:
(http://i.imgur.com/dPVuRYit.jpg)

I made it into Game boy style, which is suppose to be more simpler but it does not look right to me. Any Crits or Comments.
(http://i.imgur.com/EqJiakW.png)
Title: Re: Melon Bread I guess!?
Post by: CelioHogane on April 23, 2015, 02:07:12 am
Two advices

Instead of making it 5x5 blocks make it 4x4, like in the photos...

Don't make it gameboy style, is not that easy to get that is a melonpan...
Title: Re: Melon Bread I guess!?
Post by: yaomon17 on April 23, 2015, 02:26:59 am
Also, it would probably look more like bread if you gave it some depth, which is probably easier to do if you draw it at an slanted angle rather than from top-down angle.
Title: Re: Melon Bread I guess!?
Post by: hawken on April 23, 2015, 09:19:00 am
There doesn't seem to be any hard and fast rule about lines on melonpan.

(http://e-poket.com/illust/img/illust/non030.jpg)

Heres a google image search in Japanese:

メロンパン イラスト (http://www.google.co.jp/search?q=%E3%83%A1%E3%83%AD%E3%83%B3%E3%83%91%E3%83%B3+%E3%83%89%E3%83%83%E3%82%BF%E3%83%BC&espv=2&biw=1355&bih=1280&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=5rc4VZuhK4Tq8AX8-ICoAw&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ#tbm=isch&q=%E3%83%A1%E3%83%AD%E3%83%B3%E3%83%91%E3%83%B3+%E3%82%A4%E3%83%A9%E3%82%B9%E3%83%88)
Title: Re: Melon Bread I guess!?
Post by: CelioHogane on April 23, 2015, 07:17:28 pm
ah no, i said it by the size of the pixel art, soo many lines.
Title: Re: Melon Bread I guess!?
Post by: rikfuzz on April 24, 2015, 08:11:11 am
Pixel art is not really advised for a company logo.

I'd probably do a silhouette of it in vector, with some steam-lines, and simple (diagonal) detail. (Maybe add a d-pad and buttons onto it to make you think of games, rather than green squares.  Or put it the melonpan on a GB cart label. 

It's pretty indistinct, a blob-ish shape, and not that well known here (as say a croissant or a doughnut) so steam lines might help describe it as a baked..thing. (Removing it's colour-identity by giving it a GB palette is probably not helping).