Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Zizka on April 18, 2015, 02:17:58 am

Title: Octo-Slave
Post by: Zizka on April 18, 2015, 02:17:58 am

Hello!

I'd appreciate some criticism please!

v1:
(http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2015/15/1428756429-the-dugh.png)

v2:
(http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2015/15/1428781099-the-dough-v3.png)

Current version:
(http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2015/16/1429323111-the-dough-viii.png)

Thank you!

Title: Re: Octo-Slave
Post by: TheRealAkito on April 18, 2015, 02:43:07 am

I'm new to pixel art, so if you think my advice is bad just ignore it but I love it!. The current version's glass bowl shape looked weird to me  so I fixed the more corner side if you could understand that. I also lighted the side of the out line facing the light and I darkened the lips more to show a more defined lip. All in all I like it!

(http://i.imgur.com/kxYYKVJ.png)

Title: Re: Octo-Slave
Post by: Zizka on April 18, 2015, 01:27:56 pm

Hello, TheRealAkito,  :)

I didn't think your advice was bad at all. I had my suspicions about the dome but you've confirmed my suspicions.

So, I fixed the dome. I darkened the lips. I tried for some reflection in the glass dome (to simulate glass), I reshaped the little guy under the dome too.

(http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2015/16/1429363413-the-dough-v4.png)

I find the octopus looks a lot better than the little dude, still some work to be done there I would think.

I tweaked the colors some more too.