Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: megachrono on April 13, 2015, 03:18:47 am
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Hello o/
I'm sorta new to this and would like some feedback. I've done a few things but I'd really like some advice to improve. Anything would be great.
Thanks~
(http://puu.sh/hbULz/7d0d58d9be.png)
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cute character
u should give it color the white is boring
ur rendering is just kind of bevelled instead of having strong light and dark forms with self-shadowing.
u have staircase banding (https://www.google.com.au/search?q=staircase+banding&espv=1&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sboxchip=Images&sa=X&ei=YDsrVdPrNKbRmAXWvIHIBA&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ) on arm and bottom of shoe but avoided it in other places (avoid it everywhere).
try avoiding dark to light pure blue and plain yellow. try to vary the hues to make them more interesting using hue shifting (https://www.google.com.au/search?q=hue+shift+ramp&espv=1&biw=360&bih=559&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sboxchip=Images&sa=X&ei=Rz0rVcftMaWgmQXjqoDYCw&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ).
for details like the yellow skull u don't need black outlines