Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: dTfromUA on April 02, 2015, 03:39:59 am

Title: dTFromUA [beginner, WIP]
Post by: dTfromUA on April 02, 2015, 03:39:59 am

Hello, all! I'm dTfromUA.

I was started draw in pixel art one year ago. I have small progress from this time, because i can't draw on paper. I was started from zero. Last night i wanted to make evil rabbit. I drawn many hours, but i don't have result, which i wanted on start.
I'm very confused in shading (my big problem, which i can't solve many time. Maybe my brain can't analyze this? :D).

What you can say about this rabbit's head?

P.S. Sorry for my English, I'm Ukrainian.

(http://i.imgur.com/oAvO7nt.png)

Title: Re: dTFromUA [beginner, WIP]
Post by: dTfromUA on May 09, 2015, 01:36:43 pm

Hi, everyone! i work on space shooter's mockup two weeks. I use transparency for stars. What you can say about result of my job? What mistakes?

Thanks for feedback! I need it!

(http://i.imgur.com/U2Lkwbl.gif)

Title: Re: dTFromUA [beginner, WIP]
Post by: hapiel on May 09, 2015, 07:19:02 pm

Cute colors!
I'd say that the numbers would be more readable if they weren't dark blue on the top and bottom, those edges are the most important parts and now fade away a bit too much...

Also, I personally am not so much fan of the multi colored stars. If you're up for a challenge use the extra colors for some space nebula instead :)

Title: Re: dTFromUA [beginner, WIP]
Post by: dTfromUA on May 10, 2015, 11:41:53 am

Quote from: hapiel on May 09, 2015, 07:19:02 pm

Cute colors!
I'd say that the numbers would be more readable if they weren't dark blue on the top and bottom, those edges are the most important parts and now fade away a bit too much...

Also, I personally am not so much fan of the multi colored stars. If you're up for a challenge use the extra colors for some space nebula instead :)

Thanks for reply! I will remake stars and numbers. But I can't understand my ships good or bad?