Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Emerald371 on January 30, 2015, 07:29:26 pm
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I started this picture and before I knew it, I was done, although I'm not sure it is as good as it can be. Any suggestions for what i can work on?
(http://i.imgur.com/wmtL1iZ.png)
Here is the edits I have made! What do you all think?
(http://i.imgur.com/OcuTVT1.png)
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Love the colours! got a very similar colour pallet I have just been working with <3
ok so I would lower your mountains in the background as it obscures the silhouette of the bridge and ruins the composition a little it will also give a greater feeling of height. I'd also give the bridge a bit more information if you can, its very flat along the top and supporting struts maybe adding a bit more too it could break it up a little. Also the character is meant to be the main focus however is not on the rule of thirds and the sweeping vine only distracts the viewers eye.
(http://i.imgur.com/Jft2daq.png)
did a super quick paintover, sorry the foreground elements still need work imo.
(http://i.imgur.com/v9bJ4RI.png)
Hope it helps