Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Eli_Shane on January 07, 2015, 03:22:02 pm

Title: Parasaurolophus Running Animation
Post by: Eli_Shane on January 07, 2015, 03:22:02 pm
How's it look? Advice? Is the proportions ok? Does the rider look too still? In my opinion, it looks a lot better then most of my other artwork. BUTTTTT-What can I do to make it better?

(http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l140/Eli_Shane/Rillian%20Parasaurolophus%20Running%20Animation_zpsfy2noccs.gif)
Title: Re: Parasaurolophus Running Animation
Post by: BatElite on January 07, 2015, 05:14:09 pm
It doesn't really look much like a walk cycle, with the falling over and 180° head rotation.

As far as proportions go, the parasaurolophus' legs are a bit short is lacking a snout.
Title: Re: Parasaurolophus Running Animation
Post by: Eli_Shane on January 07, 2015, 10:49:42 pm
Well it's actually supposed to go after the parasaurolophus goes up, it will go on and run forever, but that doesn't seem to work. I kinda think it's cooler without a super long snout, and the short legs I like as well...  the head rotation actually comes from a different animation I made, this is supposed to come RIGHT after that animation, it's a continuation of that animation.