Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: JoeCreates on December 19, 2014, 09:23:23 pm
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Any feedback on the ship is much appreciated. Feel free to ignore the rocks and background, they're only rough. Thanks. :D
(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/shipshmup.png)
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Just chiming in to say that looks really cool. The only problem I see is that the smoke looks kind of weird on top of the blue thruster exhaust. At first I thought it was more rocks. I'd imagine it's not quite as confusing when animated, though.
Thumbs up.
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Lovely work, one note;
You could push the front of the ship down into perspective by making it a shade or two darker then the mid section. Atm it looks like it's pointing straight up instead of forward.
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Nice colors, though you could pick up the contrast just a little more. Adding a darker blue tone to the inside of the smoke would help to make it look more transparent rather than a solid puffy structure.
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Initial impression is great but I found there's too much happening at the back of the ship with smoke and thrusters, and i can't quite make out the forms or what is there.
Also I don't rly like the guns along the wings or their shapes as they seem like such an "obvious" way to design it but that could just be me