Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: ouchz on December 19, 2014, 05:13:26 am

Title: Hi,this is my first time posting
Post by: ouchz on December 19, 2014, 05:13:26 am

I'm new to pixel art, so my style keeps changing.
The first two actions are imitation. The third one is an original action, MJ moonwalk to dodge, and circle kick to attack.
oh my poor English.orz
(http://i.imgur.com/AI56SrK.gif)
(http://i.imgur.com/eRCkarS.gif)
(http://i.imgur.com/OFaNGRf.gif)

Title: Re: Hi,this is my first time posting
Post by: Dyluckk on December 19, 2014, 05:24:07 am

It seems your image links are broken.  :o
Please use http://imgur.com/ (http://imgur.com/) to post them.

Title: Re: Hi,this is my first time posting
Post by: ouchz on December 19, 2014, 08:38:27 am

Thanks, I repost them, is it OK now?

Title: Re: Hi,this is my first time posting
Post by: Rosier on December 23, 2014, 09:24:47 am

By 'imitation,' do you mean they are based on other animations?  If so, would you mind posting them?


They all look pretty good, and the effects are cool.  The thing I'd say to work on is to make a few more frames.  The first one in particular just stops.

Title: Re: Hi,this is my first time posting
Post by: ouchz on December 24, 2014, 06:51:42 am

Quote from: Rosier on December 23, 2014, 09:24:47 am

By 'imitation,' do you mean they are based on other animations?  If so, would you mind posting them?


They all look pretty good, and the effects are cool.  The thing I'd say to work on is to make a few more frames.  The first one in particular just stops.

of course.
this is the first one,it's a video tutorial，I have no gif.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2lrLODlOP5s
and this is the second one.
(http://i.imgur.com/MhiRfyO.gif)

Title: Re: Hi,this is my first time posting
Post by: Rosier on December 27, 2014, 03:46:44 am

I'd like to see some more custom animations as well, but I would also work on making sure the limbs flow a bit better.  Probably because they're 1 pixel thick, they kind of jolt around a lot.