Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Fizzick on December 16, 2014, 10:12:13 pm

Title: Ork Ship
Post by: Fizzick on December 16, 2014, 10:12:13 pm

i already postedx this to pixel joint but i have decided to work on it more in regards to pixel refinement.
before i begin, what kind of color/structure changes do you think would be interesting?
(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/ship__r1575394731.png)

Title: Re: Ork Ship
Post by: Decroded on December 17, 2014, 12:19:15 am

Cool.

Is it a crashed dropship?
Or some kind of tall tank like thingy?

Can't quite make out forms.
Can't tell how it moves itself around.

Title: Re: Ork Ship
Post by: Fizzick on December 17, 2014, 04:49:48 am

It's some kind of space ship that crashed it on its nose.

Title: Re: Ork Ship
Post by: pgil on December 17, 2014, 02:45:16 pm

Pretty cool.  I really like your palette.

I could tell it was some kind of crashed rocket / jet built out of junk.  If you want to make that more obvious, you could make that wing on the left side bigger.  Aside from that, the ship looks good.

I don't know what you have planned for the background, but right now those trees are a little distracting, the way they seem to make a straight line across the top of the image. There doesn't seem to be any variation in height or distance.