Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Red_Mist on October 08, 2014, 11:20:12 pm
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Made a truck. ::)
Anyone here have any idea on how to improve the tires?
Other than that, I'm pretty happy with it.
(http://i.imgur.com/XP346bC.gif)
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Because they're perfectly circular, they appear to be facing the camera head on instead of being at an angle like the rest of the vehicle. I'd just squish them a bit horizontally and then clean up whatever needs to be cleaned up. :)
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Looks like the back right tires should be visible as well from this perspective.
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Thank you both! This is why we have a forum. I've been staring at this for quite a bit of time. I could see some things were off. I needed another set of eyes to bring the obvious to my attention.
I think I improved the truck, but the tires still dont seem to be rubbery enough.
Definitely an improvement imo.
(http://i.imgur.com/VbwIqF8.gif)
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I suppose you used an example, but maybe you could use other colors (so many grey is boring) and another shape like this
(http://www.baytruck.com/images/homepage_truck_pic.png)
In this example, you can see the front is nearly same angle than yours , so wheels are more compressed
All metal part could have some highlight :)
the cabin seams to be too large with your shape
(http://wrkmachines.com/imgs/a/a/g/h/j/scania_pgrt___series_420_1980_1_lgw.jpg)
(http://www.truckswallpaper.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/truck-wallpaper-widescreen-105.jpg)