Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Druvan on September 19, 2014, 08:24:17 pm

Title: [Critique Request] Main Character
Post by: Druvan on September 19, 2014, 08:24:17 pm

So i've been working on this character for some days now, i'm almost new to drawing this type of things but i think i got the catch of it now. But i still think i can do these animation better but i don't know how... Post what you think please

Running:
Right
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/172677731/Character2.gif)
Up
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/172677731/CharacterUp.gif)
Down
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/172677731/CharacterDown1.gif)
Dive Roll:
(https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/172677731/CharacterRoll1.gif)

Title: Re: [Critique Request] Main Character
Post by: orotoros on October 17, 2014, 05:51:39 pm

I'm pretty new to this stuff too but i think the up and down animations look too similar.

Title: Re: [Critique Request] Main Character
Post by: michelcote on October 18, 2014, 05:38:40 pm

On the up and down animations, the character's thighs should be bulkier to match the other two anims. I like the stick lower legs though  :)
On the dive roll, the frame with the 3 diagonal-looking lines looks weird in motion. Maybe bend the character's torso deeper to avoid overstretching the arms, or place the arms/legs differently?