Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: M¨ller on September 10, 2014, 04:20:38 am

Title: Girl Plataform C+C are Welcome
Post by: M¨ller on September 10, 2014, 04:20:38 am
(http://s4.postimg.org/8vhih3mgd/girl.png)

WIP main-char for plataform mockup, need c+c

thanks!
Title: Re: Girl Plataform C+C are Welcome
Post by: YellowLime on September 10, 2014, 10:54:23 am

It would help if you explained more about the character and the setting she is in :)
Title: Re: Girl Plataform C+C are Welcome
Post by: M¨ller on September 10, 2014, 01:09:30 pm
Really ,Thanks dude! :D
this better now? ???
(http://s12.postimg.org/st0ou775p/girl.png) :crazy:
Title: Re: Girl Plataform C+C are Welcome
Post by: lachrymose on September 10, 2014, 01:36:20 pm
Is the yellow behind her right shoulder a shoulder pad or something?
Title: Re: Girl Plataform C+C are Welcome
Post by: M¨ller on September 10, 2014, 02:35:31 pm
this is the hair of she :crazy:
Title: Re: Girl Plataform C+C are Welcome
Post by: Sidereal on September 10, 2014, 03:02:02 pm
Quick Edit :L

(http://oi57.tinypic.com/15o6pvd.jpg)
Title: Re: Girl Plataform C+C are Welcome
Post by: hobbler_toppler on September 10, 2014, 06:32:08 pm
Apparently I'm not in the majority here, but the clusters behind her shoulders weren't confusing for me after your first edit. It just looks like her hair is spilling over her shoulders, which I think is what you intended. I think what may be confusing people is that one cluster of hair on the left shoulder which is outlined for no apparent reason, whereas the rest of her hair has no outline.

I think you could make her boots a darker shade of brown. I don't feel like they stand out as much as they should against the grass. And just because they weren't originally "combat appropriate" doesn't mean they aren't allowed to look feminine. Maybe try slimming them down a bit.

Here's an edit. Remember that these are my opinions and I'm not an amazing artist by any means.

(http://i61.tinypic.com/b3opj6.png)