Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: thoc on August 21, 2014, 03:36:54 am

Title: Pixel Characters - Feedback Needed!
Post by: thoc on August 21, 2014, 03:36:54 am

Hey guys, I can´t show much because it is a new project and not only mine. But I am the artist and I am trying to see some characters perspective.

I want to know what do you think about those before I start animating them! =D

Thanks!

1 - (http://i.imgur.com/7O1ujIV.png)

2 - (http://i.imgur.com/tQZoWvt.png)

3 - (http://i.imgur.com/IXyk3uq.png)

Title: Re: Pixel Characters - Feedback Needed!
Post by: littlenando on August 22, 2014, 09:41:29 pm

These are super cool!

Title: Re: Pixel Characters - Feedback Needed!
Post by: thoc on August 22, 2014, 11:20:03 pm

Thank you! Any tips? =D

Title: Re: Pixel Characters - Feedback Needed!
Post by: Tidbit on August 24, 2014, 07:08:58 pm

I like these a lot actually!
Images 2 and 3 seem very well laid out and look like a lot of attention was put into their proportions while image number 1 seems to be a little lacking in that department. I think it might be because of how his body seems to be turned and that there isn't a very strong line for where his legs and chest meet. I also feel that number three could use an extra shade of dark skin tone on the bottoms of his arms just to help with the distinction, not a whole lot mind you.
I'm excited to see where you continue to take these, I really like them!

Title: Re: Pixel Characters - Feedback Needed!
Post by: Decroded on August 25, 2014, 06:47:45 am

Please repost at 1:1 scale.
This forum has built in scaling by click / shift-click the image.

Title: Re: Pixel Characters - Feedback Needed!
Post by: thoc on August 26, 2014, 02:41:35 am

There it is =D And thank you for your feedback Tidbit!

I will keep doing new stuff and posting here, and I totally agree, the First one seems smaller then the others but he is actually taller haha

Title: Re: Pixel Characters - Feedback Needed!
Post by: Hamenopi on August 28, 2014, 02:04:18 pm

I see orcs.
Brutal orcs from the desert ready to descend upon the farmers and peasants.
Pic 1 is their leader, the Alpha orc. He looks down on the valley from the mountain top.
Pic 3 is their standard bearer, he keeps his eyes on the alpha as a fierce gust of wind slaps at the tattered, blood signed hide.
The alpha darts glances to the standard bearer before studying the rest of his warriors for a few eternal moments.
Lingering in the rocks, the alpha waits for the tips of the setting sun to lick the next range to the west.
Once the sun rests into the bosom of the Earth, the alpha nods his head towards pics 2.
His howl starts their night time descent.

At least that's what the pics said to me.
-Edit for misspellings-

Title: Re: Pixel Characters - Feedback Needed!
Post by: thoc on August 28, 2014, 07:00:40 pm

Oh man! That´s amazing story already haha

Actually the idea it´s about gods and tribes. the first one is the main character (I am going to make changes to him yet) and he stats as a child and grows up within the game unfold.

But everything is just on sketch yet! as soon as I got more stuff I´ll keep posting =D