Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Evan on August 30, 2005, 01:44:45 am
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Flaber and I decided to do a collab. He did the lines, and I did the coloring.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v601/StairwaytoEvan/Hippopotomoose.gif)
It is supposed to be a hippo crossed with a moose.
I'm pretty happy with it, hopefully you can drop some critique on me.
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The hippo part isn't implemented too well. But I see where you're going.
The legs, especially the toes, look deformed and distorted. Maybe you can work on that.
And just to save you the trouble: :D
(http://www.cs.princeton.edu/gfx/proj/sugcon/models/hippo.png)
I know that you are going for a cartoonish style/look, and it's great - let me tell you. But still, I think that if you work on the legs to make them look more real it would show more as a Hippopotomoose.
Great job, great consept, great idea, great style! 8)
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heh nice job on the colouring.
Im pretty pleased with how you coloured!
The transition between the 2 is better.
Fun collab. Was a challenge to come up with those lines. just that back leg bothers me.
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good idea, very creative. nice work from both of you. expressive eyes and face.
maybe the top of the nose should be different color to front? lighter?
have a look at the top of the back too, you have shaded it darker than the side of the belly. Just makes the lighting direction look a bit strange.
With the legs that are behind, try making them a silhoette and shading them darker than front legs.
The belly curve at the back end of him seems to curl back towards head, is this too far?
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Decent work on the horns. Bare hippo side is too green and saturated. Get a light source on the fur. AA and clean up the eye area. I think this could be twice as detailed/refined. The lineart is great, though...