Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Motrox on July 27, 2014, 10:30:54 pm

Title: [WIP] West Bank
Post by: Motrox on July 27, 2014, 10:30:54 pm
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Title: Re: [WIP] West Bank
Post by: Blobber on July 28, 2014, 06:39:12 am
Maybe curve the writing across the wall to make it follow the perspective of the wall a little? The bottom (and top) of the wall follow curves - I think the writing would look better if it had a little perspective to it as well.
Title: Re: [WIP] West Bank
Post by: Motrox on July 28, 2014, 03:17:42 pm
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Title: Re: [WIP] West Bank
Post by: PsylentKnight on July 28, 2014, 07:33:57 pm
Its almost impossible to read. But it does look way better.
Title: Re: [WIP] West Bank
Post by: Blobber on July 30, 2014, 09:49:03 am
Quote from: PsylentKnight on July 28, 2014, 07:33:57 pm
Its almost impossible to read. But it does look way better.

Agreed. I like what you did with the cracks too.
Title: Re: [WIP] West Bank
Post by: Motrox on October 15, 2014, 01:44:21 am
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Title: Re: [WIP] West Bank
Post by: Kosvid on October 25, 2014, 06:47:32 pm
Hmmm... I think some barbed wire would add even more irony to the piece.