Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: iEmo on August 01, 2006, 01:10:19 am

Title: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: iEmo on August 01, 2006, 01:10:19 am

Heres, my laterst Pixel piece. A man? ITs a line art i made but no one colored so i colored ;) Hope you  like and C+C.
(http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/1654/manhp5.png)

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: junkboy on August 01, 2006, 01:05:38 pm

I did a rough pixel "paintover" to show you how I think this can be improved. Mostly fabric-stuff.

(http://i7.tinypic.com/21mfcky.gif)

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: Buzz on August 01, 2006, 01:46:07 pm

Even thoguh that's an excellent edit...emo kids dont have muscles....

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: Helm on August 01, 2006, 02:05:05 pm

That edit is very good besides the orange skin-tone. I don't think so much saturation works well for human skin in almost all cases. iemo, study the textures and materials in the edit closely, they can be very helpful.

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: Rerg1 on August 01, 2006, 04:14:57 pm

I like the colouring on the shirt simple and nice. But emo.. Sorry but I dont really like them.

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: iEmo on August 01, 2006, 06:39:31 pm

Thanks for all the comments and ill look at the edit but why des everyone assume its a Emo?

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: Pawige on August 01, 2006, 07:02:16 pm

It might be the air-tight pants, depressed expression, long dark hair falling rakishly over one eye, and your username being iEmo. Of course, that's just speculation!

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: GOODNIGHTdestroyer on August 02, 2006, 08:29:16 pm

I wear tight pants, have long dark hair (but not covering an eye), and i'm not "emo"

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: Ryumaru on August 02, 2006, 09:46:39 pm

Quote from: GOODNIGHTdestroyer on August 02, 2006, 08:29:16 pm

(but not covering an eye)

that explains it.

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: CrumbBread on August 03, 2006, 12:56:42 am

I see it hasn't been mentioned yet: the light source is inconsistent. Hair is sorta-kinda lit from the front and the left. His right leg (our left) is lit from the front, his other leg is lit from the left (kind of). His shirt is lit from the front and a little from the right. Change those all to be consistent (and not front-lit) and it will look better =)

On another note:
I wear cargo pants and have short dark hair and I'm not anything.

Title: Re: Haven't Really made anything new in awhile so.
Post by: Rerg1 on August 03, 2006, 09:18:44 am

Lol... I wear Baggy ones... :P Anyway sorry if I was mean in anyway.