Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Mùller on April 22, 2014, 02:34:38 am

Title: Some Things
Post by: Mùller on April 22, 2014, 02:34:38 am

During the past year, I've been gradually adding or continuing this little work, for me it's just something I want to finish playing with my daughter,
more like I have little spare time due to my responsibilities come crawling slowly
need some help, any one is welcome
thanks for reading and responding.

Att: Muller
here is
character wip at last year(http://s28.postimg.org/v3pg8c9wp/Progression.png)
old animation(http://s11.postimg.org/c0sfqsk7z/Animation_Main_Char_Prototipe.gif)
old (http://s10.postimg.org/wlneq16nt/Projetct_Some_Things.png)
new animation attp(http://s22.postimg.org/rd76h1h2l/update9.gif)
Idle(http://s3.postimg.org/dtquiirbj/Standlee_Animation.gif)
Jump fail attp(http://s22.postimg.org/84ep4rmb1/image.gif)
Mushroom animation (http://s28.postimg.org/s7ykw91rd/Mushroom_Jumping.gif)
attp mockup
(http://s8.postimg.org/yxgduyemp/Scene_Mock_Up_Pixelation.png)

Title: Re: Some Things
Post by: Decroded on April 22, 2014, 03:21:37 am

I remember this.
Weren't you going for a girly skipping animation?
Seems like her front foot its kicking too far and too suddenly in new version, and where it is in the next frame isn't doing it any favours either.
Motion on the arms is a bit odd too.

When you going to mockup up some more scenes?
You got themes for levels yet?
Perhaps some of her favourite things.

Title: Re: Some Things
Post by: HarveyDentMustDie on April 22, 2014, 11:55:07 am

Personally I prefer old simplistic version (second sprite from left). Anyhow, I really like portrait that you made and health bar is very interesting. :) New tree is strange cause tree top is to small for that thick tree trunk. Also I liked your previous grass tiles more than current earthy ones. I agree with Decroded about your animations. With running animation I have impression that she is running in 3/4 perspective (especially lower part of her body) and she should in 1/2 view.

Title: Re: Some Things
Post by: Mùller on April 26, 2014, 03:45:56 pm

Quote from: HarveyDentMustDie on April 22, 2014, 11:55:07 am

With running animation I have impression that she is running in 3/4 perspective (especially lower part of her body) and she should in 1/2 view.

I'm sorry, but i do not understand, for perspective, I do not understand 1/2 or 3/4, but about 1/2 an example? Just so I understand better
thank you

Title: Re: Some Things
Post by: HarveyDentMustDie on April 26, 2014, 05:05:20 pm

(http://i.imgur.com/7dXKwLR.jpg)
1) Full frontal view 2) 3/4 view 3) Profile (or as I called it 1/2) view :)