Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: ivan zucenko on April 19, 2014, 09:55:55 pm

Title: Steam over caffe cup
Post by: ivan zucenko on April 19, 2014, 09:55:55 pm

Learning, beginning.. advices of appropriate level for my stage appreciated :) thanks (http://bzzzpeak.com/caffe.gif)

Title: Re: Steam over caffe cup
Post by: r1k on April 20, 2014, 07:04:34 am

I think it looks a little strange cause its like shooting out puffs of steam.. I think the steam would be more continuous.  But I think the motion is done well, but maybe its a little too fast?  Just some ideas.

Title: Re: Steam over caffe cup
Post by: ivan zucenko on April 20, 2014, 07:19:15 am

Thanks. Exactly I also thought so later on... both points .. However I will try to make it less continuous, like: one puff... 3 sec wait.. other puff..
still merge two of those with some time offset... I will try that too