Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: FoxInATopHat on February 06, 2014, 12:35:12 am
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So I made this:
(http://i57.tinypic.com/opa55e.png)
But something seems off about it.
I'm proud of it, since I am by no means a professional, but I just can't seem to figure out what I'm doing wrong.
I've always had trouble just drawing rocks with a pencil, so making a pixel one is probably not going to end well. As may be apparent.
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Is it meant to be like a hard rock, or a crystal? Cause right now, I read it as soft, a bit jelly-like. I thought more harsh straight lines would give it a harder appearance, so I fiddled around with it thusly:
(http://i.imgur.com/8XQBItP.png)
I shifted the colours to go bluer when darker, added more highlights, used more angular shapes, did some pixel-level refinements, but there are some irregularities left (like that curved bottom-right). But those 90 degree angles in the shading are deliberate. A bit experimental. Like em?
I think I inadvertently made the face area look kinda flat in comparison to the depth that the upper shading gives...
ETA: I just found that this is a pre-existing character: http://jontronshow.wikia.com/wiki/Rockington
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Oh gosh, wow.
That's exactly what I was going for, but so much better. Thanks so much!
I think I'm starting to get an understanding of not only rocks but pixelart as well (analyzing the differences).
Also yes, that's the character C;
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Maybe you can take something away from these two different approaches.
(http://androidarts.com/other/rock.png)