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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: alex pang on October 13, 2013, 04:48:43 pm

Title: Fawxy Laaaady (wip) (NSFW)
Post by: alex pang on October 13, 2013, 04:48:43 pm

So started a small project while listening to Hendrix.
Called foxy lady. (fawxy laaady) :P
Lets ignore the colors, and focus on anatomy, its supposed to be exaggerated. But still insecure about the arms, and the face will need more work. also the nect just wont work for me :(
Current:
(http://s18.postimg.org/ln9nwtc11/foxy.png)

Title: Re: Fawxy Laaaady (wip) (anatomy)
Post by: Pix3M on October 13, 2013, 05:08:28 pm

What sort of exaggeration are you going for?

Title: Re: Fawxy Laaaady (wip) (anatomy)
Post by: alex pang on October 13, 2013, 05:11:26 pm

google ptoing
and you will se :P

UPDATE:
(http://s13.postimg.org/wusdvf3vr/foxy.png)
(http://s18.postimg.org/ln9nwtc11/foxy.png)

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updated now picture works!



What look I'm going for: (I LOVE PTOING!!!)

(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/upsidedownheart.png)
http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/thebluegirl.png (http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/thebluegirl.png)
http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/shapes.png (http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/shapes.png)

But more saturated
And shading closer to this:
http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/version3.gif (http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/version3.gif)
Also I'm still wondering how I should do the hair and the feat, and suggestions for background would be appreciated!
-Alex

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(http://s23.postimg.org/n8kubi6h7/foxy.png)
up too date :)

Title: Re: Fawxy Laaaady (wip) (anatomy)
Post by: Pix3M on October 15, 2013, 08:16:29 pm

Eh, it's not very close to ptoing's way of exaggeration. He should be able to explain his decisions much better, but this might sum it up.

(http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/5323/pib.png)

(Bottom right makes me think of Gangnam Style)

Part of making something interesting to look at, means creating interesting shapes. Bottom left creates a sense of weight with a large point of contact with the ground, the bottom right creates a feeling of lightness and levitation with a tiny point of contact. (which I'd compare to the sun with that wicked hair style). there is also much more variation as some body parts are greatly exaggerated or downplayed so interesting shapes are much easier to achieve. Your head, shoulders, hips, and feet are all equally exaggerated so FoxyLady appears as a boring rectangle.

I really don't think I'm in much of a position to really explain much of it, but there should be a fair number sources on the subject of composition if you were to hunt them down.

Title: Re: Fawxy Laaaady (wip) (NSFW)
Post by: Mr. Fahrenheit on October 15, 2013, 10:40:35 pm

I liked the green in it before

Title: Re: Fawxy Laaaady (wip) (NSFW)
Post by: alex pang on October 16, 2013, 05:57:22 am

(http://s9.postimg.org/p1ljy0rz3/foxye.png)
With and without green.
I have some trouble with the screen, sometimes I feel like my colors are to dark, while other times they feel too saturated...

Title: Re: Fawxy Laaaady (wip) (NSFW)
Post by: winged doom on October 16, 2013, 09:17:36 pm

Quote from: alex pang on October 16, 2013, 05:57:22 am

I have some trouble with the screen, sometimes I feel like my colors are to dark, while other times they feel too saturated...

Then don't change and don't calibrate your monitor, because i love your dark, saturated colors.

Title: Re: Fawxy Laaaady (wip) (NSFW)
Post by: alex pang on November 24, 2013, 03:48:26 pm

tried doing an edit (quicky)
(http://s22.postimg.org/3vqgmruwt/foxy.png)
I don't think, this pose works though, you guys are right!