Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Spin on September 10, 2013, 04:09:42 pm
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Here's a few things that I've done recently. Not sure if they are any good. They look ok to me.
(http://i.imgur.com/CushDyY.png)
This image I put together while following someone else's work as a guide for shading. My linework isn't that great on it and I kind of got lost in what pose I was supposed to use. I left the shoes alone to annoy some people that liked to point out what I did wrong on some pieces. Silly me.
(http://i.imgur.com/3yC7heV.gif)
A little beginner's animation. I like the bobbing a little bit, but the hair came out quite atrociously.
(http://i.imgur.com/uWjtCgV.png)
A pixel of the same character, it is also my most recent. I honestly love it. But if ya'll find any erorrs please let me know. :D
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I made a quick edit of the third peice
(http://imageshack.com/scaled/large/812/0kia.png)
some observations:
-you have alot of banding
-you tend to shade things equally everywhere, so theres not much indication of the direction of the light source.
-you tend to outline shapes with darker shades inside the outlines. This adds to the banding, and confuses the shading, making it look flat.
-the outlines are inconsistent. Theyre black in some places, but not in other places.
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I appreciate the observations. I like the way yours came out! I'll keep that stuff in mind when I do future pixels.
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Edited r1k's because hand is lost in the dress so added a highlight cluster there.
(http://i1126.photobucket.com/albums/l615/Decrosion/thing_zpsfe527421.png)
Resting temptation to keep going with this..... :yell:
IMO u should try to fix everything suggested so u can carry what u learn into ur next work.