Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ro83rt on June 24, 2006, 09:24:17 am

Title: Rodentinator Line-Art
Post by: Ro83rt on June 24, 2006, 09:24:17 am
I've always wanted to do an animal based robot so today I seized the opprotunity. I know it's just a lineart and its pretty messy at this stage but can you give me some help? Yes I know the muscle groups are insane, that's how I wanted it, but other than that can you give me some enlightment? C & C are welcomed. I call him..... Rodentinator!


And here's just a progress animation

Title: Re: Rodentinator Line-Art
Post by: Turbo on June 28, 2006, 10:46:16 pm
Looks pretty good! Reminds me of a cross between a Motor Mouse from Mars and the Wolfman character from the Megadrive Probotector / Contra Game. The tail looks wrong though, seems to be coming out from his side, i'd tweak the circular tail segments to indicate volume and perspective. The hand on the left looks odd too, maybe rotate the thumb towards us (making the palm face down more).