Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ymedron on December 08, 2012, 03:06:22 am

Title: Pumpukin
Post by: Ymedron on December 08, 2012, 03:06:22 am

I've been letting my pixel-art inspirations fester for a while, and I come back with another attempt!
Sadly Im still having trouble understanding the ramblethread, but I tried to avoid one-pixel clusters for the most part..?
(http://i615.photobucket.com/albums/tt235/Ymedron/pumpukin.png)
Edit:
Uploading it made me do some more tweaking, very inconvenient.
(http://i615.photobucket.com/albums/tt235/Ymedron/pumpukin2-1.png)

Title: Re: Pumpukin
Post by: Ashbad on December 08, 2012, 02:04:46 pm

Quick edit:

(http://img.removedfromgame.com/imgs/0-pumpkinedit.png)

- Your original colors did have some good color contrast, but it didn't seem to be nearly enough.
- Some of the internal, jaggy near-black lines were detrimental.
- Some noise at the bottom of the pumpkin.

Overall, pretty interesting pixel so far.

Title: Re: Pumpukin
Post by: Ymedron on December 08, 2012, 03:12:14 pm

Thank you for the crit. :3
I tried to address those issues using your edit:
(http://i615.photobucket.com/albums/tt235/Ymedron/pumpukin3-1.png)

Title: Re: Pumpukin
Post by: Daimoth on December 18, 2012, 01:24:52 am

Consider rethinking your character design. Not in any drastic way, but it would be nice to discern what sort of emotion the thing might be feeling, which is impossible currently.

Title: Re: Pumpukin
Post by: Ymedron on December 19, 2012, 11:18:55 am

Hm, true...
I didn't consider it an actual character while doing it. I'll try to take that into account on my future sprites!