Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: philippejugnet on October 17, 2012, 01:01:44 am
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(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/Vampire_zps789f76be.png)[
For the weekly challenge @ pixeljoint ;D ;D ;D
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The head is gigantic, that sticks out most to me. The arm on our left looks disjointed as well, make sure you have solid anatomical structure before focussing too much on the clothing. I'll wait for an update before any more in-depth critique.
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haha reminds me of a more serious version of Lord Farquaad from Shrek
http://theheatherchronicles.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/shrek_lord_farquaad.jpg
maybe you should go that direction :)
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Thanks all, them main problem wasn't the size of the face, but the arm's.
(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/Vampire_zps3d4017ed.png)
;D
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Nice colors :y: but why you characters have a always white eye? Is that your style or what? Im not sure but does he missing little bit of neck?
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I made an edit but I cant decide whether its actually any improvement or not. But here it is anyways
(http://imageshack.us/a/img811/6410/philedit.png)
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Nice colors :y: but why you characters have a always white eye? Is that your style or what? Im not sure but does he missing little bit of neck?
Based off this most likely
http://images.mmosite.com/news/null/2010/07/26/20100726222203573.jpg
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Nice colors :y: but why you characters have a always white eye? Is that your style or what? Im not sure but does he missing little bit of neck?
Based off this most likely
http://images.mmosite.com/news/null/2010/07/26/20100726222203573.jpg
Thanks all, sometimes I am blind when the topic is my own work.
Vladimir Désiré Landru
(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/Vampire_zpsa8a602f0.png)
And white eyes is my style.
r1k. I had fixed the head problem already, but I forgot to post here. Thanks for your time, and yeah, gonna reduce the hand size a little too.
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Finished (http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/73591.htm)
(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/vampire_zpsf175d8ce__r1621352771.png)
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xndsuicndisdpcducduc when will you attempt a traditional pixel art piece? At a normal size, or at least start trying to do refined pieces that demonstrate more of the "essence" of pixel art.
The background is just pointless other than for setting a color mood, the narrative of the picture is undeveloped completely, the splotches of color are distracting.
You really need to tighten your work and start working towards pieces that demonstrate tight, attractive pixels.
TPK's piece here http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/72217.htm# (http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/72217.htm#) is of similar style to you, but demonstrates the control and development that you lack and should push towards.
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To my eyes this image is visually confusing.
I mean composition not content.
I'm not sure where to look or what to follow.
messy edit:
(http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-X163fXZHsx0/UINlhcvwB5I/AAAAAAAAEJA/eAG6tOuV7So/s1600/infusionDude_4.png)
(http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-t5vUnYw7QDs/UINl0I6Bq3I/AAAAAAAAEJQ/Y8FxVk6noQA/s1600/infusionFrames.gif)
It seems to be drawn in a very straight ahead fashion.
Try some different process orders and see where it takes you.
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Thanks u all, yeah I am gonna animate it.. but I dont have a gif animation... any recomendations?
(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/01_zpsf5118d74.png)(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/02_zps480724ac.png)(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/03_zps3486b83e.png)(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/04_zpsfd08840c.png)(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/05_zps26b2f30f.png)(http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff368/philippejugnet/06_zps8e65a1e6.png)