Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: mattib on July 09, 2012, 12:00:52 am

Title: [c+c] test animation
Post by: mattib on July 09, 2012, 12:00:52 am

So, I am working on my pixel art videoclip project (http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=13294.0;wap2)
and with your help I've got to a first animation test, I would like some comments on it. The background is still work in progress, as the enemies, I still have to animate them
let me know, what does it feel like for you

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1341764990

Title: Re: [c+c] test animation
Post by: mattib on July 11, 2012, 02:41:47 pm

no comments?

Title: Re: [c+c] test animation
Post by: ptoing on July 12, 2012, 09:46:23 pm

Can you perhaps make a gif out of what you have and also post some stills?
I think that would help people in giving critique.

Title: Re: [c+c] test animation
Post by: mattib on July 14, 2012, 01:16:55 pm

Ok, I will surely do that. 
I wanted to get some comments on how did it work as a whole, but in a few hours I'll post that!

Title: Re: [c+c] test animation
Post by: mattib on July 14, 2012, 07:12:27 pm

ok, some gifs. I don't know why graphics gale changes one skin color to white but whatever. Many of these movements are inspired by how Donatello moves in a TMNT game, but everything here is drawn from scratch on paper.
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone1-1.gif)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone9.gif)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone8.gif)

now some still png's that I actually used in the animation, here the colors are ok

(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone80003.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone80002.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone50003.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone50003.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone40001.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone40003.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone20001.png)
(http://i1143.photobucket.com/albums/n623/mattteo/bastone10002.png)

every suggestion is welcome, as I am still a beginner with this technique but this project is really important to me
thank you very much

Title: Re: [c+c] test animation
Post by: mattib on July 16, 2012, 08:14:43 pm

so?

Title: Re: [c+c] test animation
Post by: Lachie Dazdarian on July 23, 2012, 02:49:45 pm

As I previously said in another forum, I think this is excellent work. Awesome for a beginner, if you are one as you say you are.

I someone pushed me to be nitpicky maybe I would add more contrast to the clothes and more movement in his hair. But perhaps you imaged it really greased up.