Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: DungeonDan on June 01, 2012, 02:38:29 pm

Title: Base any help & CC welcome
Post by: DungeonDan on June 01, 2012, 02:38:29 pm
I sure there are a few thing that can be fixed here and a few things that could make this pop more but im working on hair atm a very low point for me but when i manage it i will post that update.

So far i only put some clothing on him :)

(http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g285/blunt69690/Base-1.png)
 
Help CC Edits Welcome
Title: Re: Base any help & CC welcome
Post by: DungeonDan on June 02, 2012, 05:32:09 pm
(http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g285/blunt69690/Image4.png)

Still looking for some help on this but heres a small update
Title: Re: Base any help & CC welcome
Post by: cheatsguy on June 03, 2012, 06:51:10 pm
As far as I'm concerned, there isnt too much to change! Its a pretty solid base but make sure there is a female one :)
Title: Re: Base any help & CC welcome
Post by: xeokk on June 04, 2012, 08:52:42 am
quick edit:
(http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg692/scaled.php?server=692&filename=habahabaj.png&res=crop)
your palette is kinda hard to read. i tried to add a bit more contrast. also smoothed out a few lines. it's not perfect, but i hope you get my idea :)
Title: Re: Base any help & CC welcome
Post by: DungeonDan on June 07, 2012, 07:44:12 pm
Thanks for the help I will post updates on this later
Title: Re: Base any help & CC welcome
Post by: mistirbc on June 09, 2012, 06:01:48 am
I think they look pretty good. Maybe move the highlight on the head a little lower, or trim it a little. I don't think the joints, like the elbows, are defined, but that's ok really since its a more cartoony style.  But I think its a nice base.