Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: desgardes on May 29, 2012, 01:50:16 am

Title: Des' palace be brimmin with dump
Post by: desgardes on May 29, 2012, 01:50:16 am
(http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/425/setfinale.png)  
(http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/4840/pfftj.png)
 
Just some sprites of recent, tried animating #2 but comp be havin issues. Crits on colors/form and shadow?
Title: Re: Des' palace be brimmin with dump {~crits welcome, edits preferred~}
Post by: Grimsane on May 29, 2012, 03:10:42 am
you should probably remove or actively seperate your stuff and the sheets you used as reference on that dump, and I'd recommend doing seperate sheets for your original works and your edits, quite alot of it is looking nice though, but as i said recognized other peoples work namely game sprites/sprite sheets.

I like your FFtactics Style uprez'd character looks quite appealing. also you should probably compile that animation sheet of yours and make it into an animated gif, most people aren't going to do that themselves, and can't easily crit you on it.
Title: Re: Des' palace be brimmin with dump
Post by: ptoing on May 29, 2012, 07:24:02 am
Welcome to pixelation.

Here are a few things to consider:


Title: Re: Des' palace be brimmin with dump
Post by: desgardes on May 29, 2012, 01:53:48 pm
ptoing, I had a link to a seperate sheet full of old stuff I was offering up for edits, but there were some rips on there.
The first sheet is technically an edit, I upsized and drastically changed an ffta sprite, but its an edit nonetheless.
The seconds totally custom.