Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: yaomon17 on May 08, 2012, 03:01:37 am
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Pretty much done with the Robot Thing.
Need ideas/critique on BG.
(http://i.imgur.com/vKYnz.png)
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Ok first off the robot shading needs to be a bit smoother and some things on the robot aren't placed right like the left side of the robots wheels it's too far down and also it needs to show the inside of the wheels like you show the outside on the right side of the robot. And for the background i figured you can show the hmtv showing what it can do and all the features that come with it.
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Since it's the future, perhaps a slightly brown smoggy atmospheric effect? I think the robot looks pretty cool so far, I find the shading of the wheel set not facing us weird but other than that the shading adds a nice bulky effect to it.
Also, I hope you're fixing the "Product Details" and "$99.99" text, they look pretty scribbled in :P
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Since it's the future, perhaps a slightly brown smoggy atmospheric effect? I think the robot looks pretty cool so far, I find the shading of the wheel set not facing us weird but other than that the shading adds a nice bulky effect to it.
Also, I hope you're fixing the "Product Details" and "$99.99" text, they look pretty scribbled in :P
Yeah, it is all scribbled in so far. Ok first off the robot shading needs to be a bit smoother and some things on the robot aren't placed right like the left side of the robots wheels it's too far down and also it needs to show the inside of the wheels like you show the outside on the right side of the robot. And for the background i figured you can show the hmtv showing what it can do and all the features that come with it.
Thanks for the advice, will work on fixing immediately.