Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Godslayer on August 21, 2005, 02:21:37 am

Title: An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!
Post by: Godslayer on August 21, 2005, 02:21:37 am

(http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/1810/moi415000vs.gif)

Well, dish out the pointers! I haven't much to say, besides I really want to improve. ;D

Title: Re: An avatar for pixel joint.
Post by: ehwhy on August 21, 2005, 07:19:20 pm

Here's a quick edit of the face:
(http://home.pipeline.com/~rati/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/godslayeredit.gif)
What I did:
Desaturated the skin.
Removed the dithering because it was making the face crowded and blurry.
Changed the shading and the lips.

I hope this helps!

Title: Re: An avatar for pixel joint.
Post by: Godslayer on August 21, 2005, 07:31:58 pm

Sweet! Besides looking a bit to much for a monkey for my tastes (wich doesnt matter- it was quick) that seems to be an improvement. I guess I'm hesitant to use skin tones like that because I make the face seem empty. :-\ But on my next piece I'll take this into account.

Thanks!

Title: Re: An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!
Post by: Godslayer on August 21, 2005, 10:55:02 pm

Heres another one, using some of your crits:

(http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/9624/demented893319ld.gif)

A gift for a freind by the name of Dementedhero.

-EDIT-

Fixed the nose and forehead:

(http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/9534/demented139913sh.gif)

Title: Re: An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!
Post by: CrematedPumpkin on August 22, 2005, 01:18:33 am

I like them, the second one more than the first, and after the edit, I don't really have any crits. Good job overall ;D