Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Bjor on April 13, 2012, 02:39:57 am

Title: (C+C) Iron construct
Post by: Bjor on April 13, 2012, 02:39:57 am
This is my first real attempt at pixel art after lurking around these forums for a long while.

(http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/8794/steelconstruct.png)

I don't think it's quite bad -- I'm actually pretty proud of my work.

Please provide constructive criticism :D
Title: Re: (C+C) Iron construct
Post by: Rydin on April 16, 2012, 10:35:30 pm
I think this is overall good. It reads as metal.

One critique is to maybe further render the details between the neck and the head.  It's cloudy and seems to me that even you are unsure about what's going on in that area.  You've got a lot of real estate to play with to better represent what this area of his body looks like.
Title: Re: (C+C) Iron construct
Post by: Bjor on April 18, 2012, 12:55:56 am
What I was trying to do there was trying to make it look like the head was connected to the neck, as if the "neck" was a like a collar.

But yeah, I see what you mean. It looks pretty strange in my opinion too. I'll get back to you with an edited version.