Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Zizka on January 29, 2012, 01:23:37 am

Title: [WIP] Tree
Post by: Zizka on January 29, 2012, 01:23:37 am

Hey guys,

I used the palette from Earthbound.

(http://img38.picoodle.com/i51s/freemind/118o_12f_u5vq6.png)

As usual, would love to improve so rip it apart :).

Title: Re: [WIP] Tree
Post by: ABC on January 29, 2012, 10:49:46 pm

Really love the style. I'd like to see it developped over a whole tile set.

Title: Re: [WIP] Tree
Post by: surt on January 30, 2012, 12:45:32 am

Likewise like the style.

My suggestions:
I think you should remove the AA at the very top as with the second layer. It make the outline feel heavier than elsewhere.
Curve of the top section is not so smooth.
Continue the clean two-colour shading on the trunk.
For fixed objects such as trees I prefer to remove the black outlines betweeen the base and the ground. It helps them feel fixed in the ground rather than floating on top of it.

(http://img.uninhabitant.com/zizka_tree_edit.png)