Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: BetaMan12 on January 22, 2012, 03:42:48 am

Title: Walk Motion
Post by: BetaMan12 on January 22, 2012, 03:42:48 am
(http://i43.tinypic.com/6qwvg0.gif)
Title: Re: Walk Motion
Post by: ABC on January 22, 2012, 05:28:46 am
Looks as if the feet are disappearing.
Title: Re: Walk Motion
Post by: BetaMan12 on January 22, 2012, 05:30:50 am
care to explain
Title: Re: Walk Motion
Post by: jams0988 on January 22, 2012, 06:07:02 am
There's not much to explain...you can see his feet half the time, and the other half, you can't. You should be able to see his feet, even when his legs are back.
Title: Re: Walk Motion
Post by: Ryumaru on January 22, 2012, 07:34:51 am
This is fairly good for a " run motion" as opposed to a walk motion. A walk would require much less action. The disappearing feet for example work fine in a top down run, but seem out of place for something entitled a walk motion.
Title: Re: Walk Motion
Post by: Fickludd on January 22, 2012, 10:58:02 am
As Ryumaru says, this is a pretty nice run animation. I actually not sure about the english term, but he is actually running in pace, ie the arm and leg on the same side are extended forwards at the same time - whereas in a natural run the arms and legs are in a counter motion. Also the feet are quite twisted outwards which makes it seem like he's jumping from obstacle to obstacle rather than simply running on flat ground. 
Title: Re: Walk Motion
Post by: Manupix on January 22, 2012, 01:04:30 pm
Agree with comments so far. Also, arms and legs on the same side synchronize, should be opposite sides.
Title: Re: Walk Motion
Post by: Juninho on January 23, 2012, 12:41:07 am
When a person walks, she didn't lifts his legs, it just passes them back, this usually happens when a person runs

use this animation as a reference

(http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/mock_fit_walking.gif)

and I did an edit improve the colors and other things :)

(http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/3285/44662468.png)

I think he is better looking forward