Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: GOODNIGHTdestroyer on May 14, 2006, 10:46:07 pm

Title: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: GOODNIGHTdestroyer on May 14, 2006, 10:46:07 pm

I wanted to stray away from the polygons for a moment, and create something really organic.

Yo yo, check it:

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v79/jsgo410/dsafw.png)

Remember, it's a work in progress.

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: big brother on May 15, 2006, 04:59:26 am

The third leg looks a bit short.

Could use a bump on the contrast, specifically on the skin. Right now it looks rather flat.

The negative space between the arm and the leg is causing more visual tension than you probably intended.

My eye wants to see a face, but the ramp is so gradual (might be the light background) that it's hard to distinguish any features (alien or otherwise).

I'm guessing that his left "leg" is an indication that this piece is still a WIP?

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: Andy Tran on May 15, 2006, 06:41:10 am

 The WIP looks good. Yes, about the contrast. The contrast needs to be better. The belly shouldn't be below the stomach.

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: DrDerekDoctors on May 15, 2006, 11:35:18 am

LOL! Is that a cock?!

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: Helm on May 15, 2006, 12:27:57 pm

looks like a cock, probably is a cock. Carrying on?

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: GOODNIGHTdestroyer on May 15, 2006, 03:56:49 pm

It could be called a third leg, but yes it is a cock. A big juicy cock.

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: DrDerekDoctors on May 15, 2006, 07:49:41 pm

In that case, where's its banjo-string?

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: setz on May 15, 2006, 08:40:22 pm

I'm not making any sense out of the head, and the claw/whatever on his arm looks abit small.

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: Dhaos on May 15, 2006, 10:41:59 pm

Very interesting. Pretty evil design...minus the bright pretty colors heh. The thing could use some contrast, and the 'leg-ish-like-things' could use some volume, they're fairly flat. Pretty cool creature though, hope ya get a chance to finish it.

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: Alex on May 16, 2006, 06:28:44 pm

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v81/Marshy/dsafw.gif)

i just really disliked the penis you had....

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: big brother on May 16, 2006, 10:24:56 pm

This one's much longer.

An improvement.

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: Andy Tran on May 17, 2006, 12:54:52 am

 LOL. It's not really a penis heh. Penises don't look like that. It looks like a hip of the character.

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: GOODNIGHTdestroyer on May 17, 2006, 02:09:14 am

Quote from: Andy Tran on May 17, 2006, 12:54:52 am

LOL. It's not really a penis heh. Penises don't look like that. It looks like a hip of the character.

Actually it was intended to be a penis. Sorry.

I really have difficulty with contrast, for some reason it looks right on my screen, but you all say it's wrong. Someone help me please.

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: Zolthorg on May 17, 2006, 02:37:42 am

http://epaperpress.com/monitorcal/

Title: Re: WIP - Demon Creature
Post by: Andy Tran on May 17, 2006, 02:42:32 am

 Heh. Then nvm for me.