Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Stava on April 15, 2011, 01:31:35 pm

Title: Need help with player sprite
Post by: Stava on April 15, 2011, 01:31:35 pm

I can't get this sprite fixed, been working on it for awhile, always has some issues I'd love to get fixed.
Since I'm not really sure what I'm doing I'd rather post it here and get some critiques/edits from more experienced pixel artists. Thanks a lot, any critique/edit is appreciated.  :)
1st attempt: (http://i56.tinypic.com/1611aoj.png)

My friend said the head is too big and it looks weird, it's meant to be chibi though but I did another edit..

2nd attempt: (http://i56.tinypic.com/8x8ql5.png)

This one is apparently looking like alien  :lol: Both have some body issues, and I'm not sure if angle is proper isometric

Didn't use any references..

Title: Re: Need help with player sprite
Post by: Froli on April 15, 2011, 03:00:47 pm

I adjusted mostly the head of the female character.

(http://files.myfrogbag.com/0b5ctp/chibi.png)

This is Adarias specialty  :blind: Perhaps he might drop by to help

Title: Re: Need help with player sprite
Post by: Stava on April 15, 2011, 03:11:50 pm

Oh thanks a lot.
I don't like the edit much, the eyes mainly are kinda weird, but it gives me an idea, I'll try editing the sprite again now maybe it gets better. Thanks a lot  ;D ;D

Edit: Here's the outcome.. I'm happier with this than last sprite I posted, but still not sure if I should start animating or work on more fixing?
(http://i51.tinypic.com/hvc5ew.png)

Thanks Froli again  :)

Title: Re: Need help with player sprite
Post by: Froli on April 15, 2011, 05:01:51 pm

It's better.
I just checked and noticed something with the right arm I edited before and adjusted it a bit by 1 pixel. See if this works out for you.
(http://files.myfrogbag.com/0b5ctp/hand.png)

Title: Re: Need help with player sprite
Post by: Stava on April 15, 2011, 05:17:02 pm

I don't know.. I don't like the anatomy of your edit much..
But I like the shading a lot, I copied your bra/panties shading and most of the body part on my last edit  :P

Title: Re: Need help with player sprite
Post by: Froli on April 15, 2011, 05:35:38 pm

I adjusted the eyes and arms based on the guide line I'm following so that it could have a correct perspective.
(http://files.myfrogbag.com/0b5ctp/fullalignment1.gif)

Try adding the same line on the ones you made so far and and its a bit off.
 
[edit]
Adjusted the legs by 1 pixel longer, readjust the bra, moved the head back and testing a hairstyle.
(http://files.myfrogbag.com/0b5ctp/isogirli.png)

Title: Re: Need help with player sprite
Post by: Stava on April 15, 2011, 06:25:46 pm

Oh I see what you mean.
What do you think about this:
(http://i53.tinypic.com/2pontjm.png)