Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Krack on March 14, 2011, 06:53:34 am

Title: Soldier [WIP]
Post by: Krack on March 14, 2011, 06:53:34 am

intro...

hello i'm malcolm and i have little experience with pixels and im pretty much just starting out. i join this community to learn and share ideas, tips, stds, etc and just to have fun with pixels :]

moving on....

here's a sketch i worked on from time to time. i just did the best i can with the stuff i know
would like suggestions, ideas, drugs, tips, lessons, etc
(http://i329.photobucket.com/albums/l373/krack43/Pixel/Soldier21.png)
[not final]

thanks

i have more stuff i've worked on and would like to share but right now im tired

Title: Re: Soldier [WIP]
Post by: adcrusher524 on March 14, 2011, 10:44:46 am

The leg most forward to the viewer has a very long thigh, and his calf is too short because of that. Other than that, it looks pretty sweet.
Good luck!

Title: Re: Soldier [WIP]
Post by: Krack on March 16, 2011, 12:31:37 am

hmmm thanks

Title: Re: Soldier [WIP]
Post by: TheChannel on March 16, 2011, 01:55:48 am

Look good,  but
The farthest back leg should have the heel risen a little bit.  (Looks as though he could break his ankle)
His farthest leg out's foot looks like a rise starts between the toes and heel,  which at least for me is impossible to do.  Start the risng at the base of the toes.

Looking good though!  Keep it up.