Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: thanslo on January 23, 2011, 07:02:20 pm

Title: first pixelanimation
Post by: thanslo on January 23, 2011, 07:02:20 pm

hello,
this is our first animation. we would appreciate constructive criticism.


(http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9018/ente01.gif)

cheers,
the two from thanslo

Title: Re: first pixelanimation
Post by: Solluxx on January 23, 2011, 07:04:54 pm

ahahah this made me laugh  :D

the main thing i notice is that parts of the body move but the body as a whole stays still i think that alittle body movmentmight do wonders(in my opinion ;))

Title: Re: first pixelanimation
Post by: Decroded on January 27, 2011, 01:49:34 pm

Quote from: thanslo on January 23, 2011, 07:02:20 pm

hello,
this is our first animation. we would appreciate constructive criticism.


(http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9018/ente01.gif)

cheers,
the two from thanslo

Lol looks funny as.
Yeah the body should move too and if its running then maybe its wings could flap too.
It could be being chased by a dog or something if you're feeling adventurous...