Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Solluxx on January 23, 2011, 06:52:36 pm

Title: Bot-Zero
Post by: Solluxx on January 23, 2011, 06:52:36 pm

hola everyone, heres another pic i would like ur opinion on. Its just a robot i made for fun but i would like to improve it if at all possible.

(http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/5780/bot0.png)

Ignore the background its just something i threw together instead of white. Ty  ;D

Title: Re: Bot-Zero
Post by: McSkippy on January 25, 2011, 02:04:48 am

The black lines in this picture are really turning me off from this piece. How about doing some sel-out and AA, it would look great on this awesome looking robot of yours! ;D

Title: Re: Bot-Zero
Post by: Stratto on January 25, 2011, 02:11:18 am

refine your outlines al little bit more.
bot arms look awkward, since they both have only 1 joint in different places (the wrist on the left, and the arm on the right. )
background and ground could use some shadows.

Title: Re: Bot-Zero
Post by: Solluxx on January 25, 2011, 09:51:32 pm

oh yea didnt even notice the joint problem  :P thanks for the tips anything else you guys can see?
and about the AA i use paint so ill see what i can do.

Title: Re: Bot-Zero
Post by: Solluxx on January 25, 2011, 11:06:33 pm

heres an update***
(http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7052/84741448.png)

i tried really hard to AA the edges but nothing i did looked right so meh.
took away the background cause i didnt like it, added joints,fixed a few little things
So if you can give me a quick easy way to AA id appreaciate it  ;D

Title: Re: Bot-Zero
Post by: Quake on January 30, 2011, 11:42:36 pm

Hey, sorry if you didn't want an edit, but because of the background.. and well a robot i thought it should look more frightening.
So, i did an edit. Only a quick 2 minute job

(http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p181/tikeshe/robo.png)

Title: Re: Bot-Zero
Post by: Solluxx on January 31, 2011, 08:35:40 pm

haha i see what your saying and thanks for the post :D but this was just a little drawing i did for fun, it wasnt suppose to be scary or anything, justa robot. the background was just a placeholder instead of white but even still i like you idea :y: