Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: HC_Bret_Measor on January 15, 2011, 10:53:28 pm

Title: First Character WIP
Post by: HC_Bret_Measor on January 15, 2011, 10:53:28 pm

Hey Everyone,

This is my very first time doing a character. The premise of the character is a cute angel that will fly around and collect stuff. I normally do environmental work and I want to stretch my wings so to speak. All feedback and C&C is welcomed. Thanks for your time.


(http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5416/toonwip.png)
By Bret Measor (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/redthunder69) at 2011-01-15


(http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/3862/toonwip2.png)
By Bret Measor (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/redthunder69) at 2011-01-15

Title: Re: First Character WIP
Post by: EvilEye on January 16, 2011, 09:31:31 am

Why are the arms so far down on the body? You have a lot of gradient shading + pillow shading on both versions which makes them look very flat. Think about the underlying shapes and shade things accordingly.