Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Manxana on April 15, 2006, 07:05:13 pm

Title: Punk Punk, a punk rocker..
Post by: Manxana on April 15, 2006, 07:05:13 pm

(http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8601/punkyguywip8ll.png)

I made this yesturday but I "finished today" I think I still need to work on it specially the boots and the anatomy :\

Title: Re: Punk Punk, a punk rocker..
Post by: Blick on April 15, 2006, 08:04:07 pm

I'm really not liking those boots. They look plasticy. Like condoms for his feet. I'd suggest adding laces, lowering the top edge a lot and basically make them look more like shoes rather than plastic tube socks. And the green highlights on the blue shirt really aren't working.

Everywhere there's skin it looks good. I like the face especially, although his ear could be larger and more defined.

Title: Re: Punk Punk, a punk rocker..
Post by: Zach on April 15, 2006, 08:06:39 pm

ARMY BOOTS.. expect an edit maybe

Title: Re: Punk Punk, a punk rocker..
Post by: Xion on April 15, 2006, 09:42:00 pm

The torso and head look great...looks kinda Splatpixel-y. Everything else, especially the legs, are kinda meh in comparison, though I do like the far (fore)arm and the near hand.
Cool.

Title: Re: Punk Punk, a punk rocker..
Post by: Zach on April 15, 2006, 11:10:50 pm

(http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g23/artfocker/lastofthemohikans.png)

sorry for ruining some of the stuff on there but i think it benefits from some of the fixes a lot..

should add a guitar in there

Title: Re: Punk Punk, a punk rocker..
Post by: sonic_reaper on April 16, 2006, 12:42:10 am

 :(  What does that fix exactly?

Looking back at the original, the head/face are really well done.  His right arm is really weird/out of place though.  Have it relaxed and on his hip/in a pocket or something.  And consider an alternative color scheme.  Blue and green don't work together all that well (especially the ones you've selected) ...