Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Joe on November 22, 2010, 06:23:18 pm

Title: Frog Key Frames
Post by: Joe on November 22, 2010, 06:23:18 pm

I've got this sketch going:

(http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/7760/jump2.gif)

So I'm trying to get this guy to hop over the other one to the next slot without touching him.  It's kind of hard to make it convincing , because that kind of jump isn't natural for a frog.  If you check this out on your graphics program, look at frames 8,9, and 10(When he's landing.)  Aren't they awkward?  I can't think of how to position his body and legs so it looks more natural.

Anyone have any suggestions on this?

Title: Re: Frog Key Frames
Post by: NaCl on November 22, 2010, 08:09:31 pm

The frames look alright, seems like the timing is just way off. There is no spring or pop, he just moves at a constant speed over the head of the other frog.

Title: Re: Frog Key Frames
Post by: Joe on November 23, 2010, 01:00:39 pm

Thanks for the tip.  I was working on the short hop when you posted, so I tried to implement it:

(http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/6189/bulljump.gif)

But it seems weak.  Maybe it doesn't show up on a hop that short.  I kept playing with the frame speeds, but I can't get a "pop" going.  If I were to get that effect, would the frames be faster at the beginning or towards the middle?

Title: Re: Frog Key Frames
Post by: evilDan on November 23, 2010, 08:52:46 pm

Hey there, I like what you have so far a lot!

I had a couple of suggestions:

1. Don't worry about the frame in between where the legs are  outstretched and where they curl back up.  It sounds like that may be the part tripping you up.
2. You could add a frame towards the beginning and the end of the frog squashing before it leaps and afterward before it settles.  I did a (very rough) mock up to show what I mean:

(http://dansilber.com/blog/transfer/frogJump3.gif)

Title: Re: Frog Key Frames
Post by: Stickman on November 24, 2010, 01:15:45 pm

Be sure to extend the frogs front legs when leaping.

Title: Re: Frog Key Frames
Post by: Shrub on November 24, 2010, 08:22:09 pm

Quote from: evilDan on November 23, 2010, 08:52:46 pm

Hey there, I like what you have so far a lot!

I had a couple of suggestions:

1. Don't worry about the frame in between where the legs are  outstretched and where they curl back up.  It sounds like that may be the part tripping you up.
2. You could add a frame towards the beginning and the end of the frog squashing before it leaps and afterward before it settles.  I did a (very rough) mock up to show what I mean:

(http://dansilber.com/blog/transfer/frogJump3.gif)

Gotta commend you for that - I was going to post about anticipation and whatnot, but you nailed it for him.
Great edit.