Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Mr_L on November 11, 2010, 01:38:10 am

Title: [WIP]New guy needs heavy C+C,edit if you wish.
Post by: Mr_L on November 11, 2010, 01:38:10 am
This is an OC named Jeffrey Lowums,and I would love to know how to make him better.

(http://i61.servimg.com/u/f61/15/61/83/87/jeffre10.png)

Title: Re: [WIP]New guy needs heavy C+C,edit if you wish.
Post by: Platypotter on November 11, 2010, 04:37:14 am
Make sure you complete the next step in the walking animation, cuz if you play it like it is, itll make him look like hes doin sort of a zombie limp.
Title: Re: [WIP]New guy needs heavy C+C,edit if you wish.
Post by: voidSkipper on November 11, 2010, 01:12:18 pm
Currently, his head gets skinnier as he walks. This should decidedly not happen.
Title: Re: [WIP]New guy needs heavy C+C,edit if you wish.
Post by: Tidbit on November 11, 2010, 08:56:08 pm
Quote from: voidSkipper on November 11, 2010, 01:12:18 pm
Currently, his head gets skinnier as he walks. This should decidedly not happen.
I believe thats to make it look like the body is turning slightly, The early sonic games for the genesis did this for sonics walking frames.
Title: Re: [WIP]New guy needs heavy C+C,edit if you wish.
Post by: Mr_L on November 12, 2010, 08:41:33 pm
Quote from: Platypotter on November 11, 2010, 04:37:14 am
Make sure you complete the next step in the walking animation, cuz if you play it like it is, itll make him look like hes doin sort of a zombie limp.
(http://www.iaza.com/work/101113C/iaza16994219483600.gif)
Title: Re: [WIP]New guy needs heavy C+C,edit if you wish.
Post by: LarryPixel on November 12, 2010, 08:50:48 pm
It looks like his head is made of a half sphere.  Round the back of his head off a bit more.  The hair and eyes should give the illusiuon his head is turning.
Title: Re: [WIP]New guy needs heavy C+C,edit if you wish.
Post by: Mr_L on November 12, 2010, 09:59:44 pm
Quote from: LarryPixel on November 12, 2010, 08:50:48 pm
It looks like his head is made of a half sphere.  Round the back of his head off a bit more.  The hair and eyes should give the illusiuon his head is turning.
Okay I will redo the walk,This is the first custom walk I ever made.
Title: Re: [WIP]New guy needs heavy C+C,edit if you wish.
Post by: Mr_L on November 12, 2010, 11:17:53 pm
Well I actually am quiting this now but I am going to start on a new and easier project.