Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: DtFM on October 08, 2010, 02:52:50 pm
-
My first attempt at pixel art. I'm not too happy with his body when he is holding out his wand.
(http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6893/45193592.png)
-
Maybe you should make the wand a bit smaller? it still looks more like a sword, even without the actual hilt. Other than that, it looks like it came right out of the zelda game! 2 thumbs up! :y: :y:
But... What about the upwalk sprites?
-
The outline on the wand's movement blur kinda' makes it look like a pick-axe ::)
-
Wait, that isn't a pickaxe?
-
Instead of adding outline to the blur, fill it with a single solid color.
-
I worked on the wand movement a bit to make it less like a pick-axe. I tried making the wand smaller as well, I haven't decided whether I prefer it yet.
(http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/30/wand.png)
Old:
(http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/4665/oldwand.gif)
New:
(http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/7119/newwand.gif)
New smaller wand:
(http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7426/newerwand.gif)
I also animated the walking sprites:
(http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5812/walkz.gif)(http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/8383/walkside.gif)
-
Why don't you just try blurring it? As in, taking both the start point and the end point for the wand swing and filling in the middle with a solid color. Should look great, I predict :y:
-
I reworked the wand animation a little and added another frame:
(http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/5527/wandframes.png)
(http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/9596/wandrevised.gif)
I'll try to make a blurred version like EvilEye suggested.
-
Or add one more frame, so the arc of the blur remains there briefly when the sword has finished moving.
-
(http://www.argylebox.com/images/edits/wandedit_argyle.gif)
More in the spirit of EvilEye's suggestion, here's one with a more solid blur and no sword in-between view. Gives it more impact to just have a FLASH tracing the arc from start to finish than to show the sword in its mid-arc state.
-
Argyle has the basic idea. Here is my edit:
(http://www.anti-soft.com/graphics/pixelation/wandedit_argyle_edit.gif)
-
I had a go at blurring the wand motion:
(http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7057/wandedit.gif)
And got around to making an upwalk animation:
(http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8489/walkw.gif)
And potion drinking:
(http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/6089/drink.gif)
I also had an attempt at doing Hagrid (32x32 sprites make it a lot easier to see how much of an amateur I am :)):
(http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2007/hagrid.png)